What I think that you did well was that your heading(s) are clear for showing what the text is about and interesting by adding more words that helps attract readers. I think what you could improve is that you should make the fonts a little bit larger so it could be more clear and for the part when Justin Bieber and Selena Gomez received threats on Twitter, you could add more information about that.
What I think that you did well was that your heading(s) are clear for showing what the text is about and interesting by adding more words that helps attract readers.
ReplyDeleteI think what you could improve is that you should make the fonts a little bit larger so it could be more clear and for the part when Justin Bieber and Selena Gomez received threats on Twitter, you could add more information about that.